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 =================
 
   This tutorial will help you get more familiar with *Kapow!*.
+
   It tells you the story of a junior ops person landing a new job in a small
-  company.  He'll face different challenges of increasing difficulty, but with
-  the help of his experienced senior mate and *Kapow!* they will be able to pass
-  all the hurdles.
+  company.  Teaming up with an experienced senior, they'll face many challenges
+  of increasing difficulty.  With *Kapow!* at their side, they will be able to
+  pass all the hurdles.
 
   You just need to follow the steps and execute the code shown in the tutorial
   to learn *the Kapow! way*.